Author Topic: A Haiku or two (Read 70911 times)

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #30 on:** October 08, 2008, 01:31:03 AM »

*behaves*

Alas, dear Poobah
I will I do I promise

Wasn’t me, buddy!

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #31 on:** October 08, 2008, 02:38:57 PM »

Poobah of this place
It puts a grin on my face
Until I get maced

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #32 on:** October 08, 2008, 06:09:00 PM »

To Mace or not Mace
It's all downhill from there
rock scissors paper

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #33 on:** October 09, 2008, 12:23:16 AM »

A bold little girl.
something matters very much
Looks for a star stamp

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #34 on:** October 09, 2008, 09:16:12 AM »

*laughs*

Well I am still protesting whether possessive "s" adds a syllable or not!

Thus your second to last one is questionable IMHO. And I am DTM after all.

(Although your last one is correct!)

Still waiting for a "clean" non-disputable one. *fingers my Gold star sheet*

Sometimes I want this
And sometimes I prefer that
A politician

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #35 on:** October 09, 2008, 11:46:37 AM »

If your possessive notation relates to "It's" I can satisfy your concern
it is ONE syllable.

A sob myself blue
first I beg and now hardball
I have been so good!

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #36 on:** October 09, 2008, 01:21:05 PM »

Ummm. So if "It's" = 1 syllable then that Haiku was a 5-6-5. If you had used "It is" then it would have worked.

It's all down-hill from there = 6

It is all down-hill from there = 7

I swear I'm just following the rules you listed at the start of this game!

So begging for gold
On a Haiku that is wrong
You will wait for long

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #37 on:** October 09, 2008, 03:41:36 PM »

I always fancied
A Possessive Man trait. No
Characteristic!

I have given up
My longing for a star stamp
Elephant instead!!!!!

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #38 on:** October 09, 2008, 05:09:55 PM »

And then there were two
Both following all the rules
Two gold stars for you!

Haruhifan · « **Reply #39 on:** October 09, 2008, 09:39:59 PM »

Thanksgiving weekend
Early for us Canucks, eh?
Yanks get it next month.

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #40 on:** October 12, 2008, 10:42:27 PM »

Oh no the pressure !
is measured by star amount!
Two so far. Sweet bliss

Haruhifan · « **Reply #41 on:** October 13, 2008, 11:53:25 AM »

Aerio my cat
Blocking my screen and wanting
His food right now, eh!

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #42 on:** October 13, 2008, 11:01:57 PM »

It’s not about you
it's not even about me
Its how many stars.

Haruhifan · « **Reply #43 on:** October 14, 2008, 09:47:21 AM »

The Price is Right, bitch
Drew or Bob, it is all good
Spin that wheel pronto!

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #44 on:** October 14, 2008, 10:21:55 AM »

Looks at all the lines
Sees how good everyone does
Gold stars all around!

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