Author Topic: A Haiku or two (Read 70976 times)

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #45 on:** October 14, 2008, 11:39:38 PM »

Whohoooooo *does a lil dance*

Phone broken again
Yet another one bites the dust.
I am pure Luddite. $:-\$

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #46 on:** October 16, 2008, 10:33:58 AM »

Uh oh! A 5-8-5

A-noth-er = 3 *frowns*

Yes he is writing
Tickets for the bad haiku
Did you miss me much?

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #47 on:** October 17, 2008, 06:22:40 AM »

No! No! and No! Stamps foot I deleted the Yet!

*mutters @ self*
Bugger

Is a white lie ok?
Or a sin of omission?
Is weather nice there?

Haruhifan · « **Reply #48 on:** October 17, 2008, 11:48:11 AM »

Please let the Rays win
Not another Red Sox win
World Series coming!

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #49 on:** October 17, 2008, 02:32:32 PM »

A white lie maybe
But ok is more then one
Ticketed again!

raven · « **Reply #50 on:** October 17, 2008, 07:17:08 PM »

first try... waits for the judging...

tummy is hungry
tormented with images
now need to go eat

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #51 on:** October 17, 2008, 07:32:32 PM »

Tri tip is yummy
All secreted with flavor
Raven does not know.

raven · « **Reply #52 on:** October 17, 2008, 08:38:47 PM »

now i have eaten
the drooling has stopped for now
its time for champagne

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #53 on:** October 17, 2008, 08:41:49 PM »

Stopped threw me a bit
But it is perfect again
Is tess taking notes?

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #54 on:** October 18, 2008, 12:58:29 AM »

I don’t think she is
She knows the secret you see
Simplification

Besides without me
It would be a total snore
A blonde A asset

No one else to tease
No topping to be done. See
A public whip E!

Should I? Perhaps. Thinks
Make this Haiku separate
Raven told you see.

About the post count
I am ahead already
Lucky Lucky me!

Never mess with tess

She may be one syllable
But she CAN Haiku

Much Much Much better
Than a miserable one
Or even a two

Have fun pretty please
You may need to Count again
Extraordinary

Haruhifan · « **Reply #55 on:** October 18, 2008, 07:33:22 AM »

OH MY GOSH TEMPTESS
That Anime GIF Rocks, eh!
Made my weekend there.

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #56 on:** October 18, 2008, 09:01:52 AM »

Like it too Haru!
Anime suited the urge
To poke the Poke E

DTM (Wet and grey) · « **Reply #57 on:** October 19, 2008, 12:17:04 AM »

Looks at all the words
Counts and counts the lines. Again
Just to be certain

Looks at the bottom
Sees how often they are changed
Tries not to chuckle

Seems funny to gloat
When they must have been wrong once
Maybe thats just me

So I will just type
One more Haiku (With no edits)
Arrogant arse hole!

Tinks (NSFW) · « **Reply #58 on:** October 19, 2008, 03:42:48 AM »

Check once and then twice
No Star! Gee, Deserves a page
A minimum three!

And edits? Oh yes.
Not for reason you decreed
Additions and gif .

Time of the essence
Required me to disappear
Then to reappear

Administer God
Edits not just corrections
All gone to your head?

Giggles with delight
A sin of omission. Yes?
Have more Post than thee

Look what I have done
Oh! Another long, Haiku
Better not Edit !

But you must know now
I have a soft spot for One
Arrogant arse hole

Perhaps tender heart
But I like to think is more
Calling of the soul

Master of Haiku
The moment where lips open
And she breathes a “oh”

He guides her hips
Yes they have found a rhythm now
She, yielding to thee

Her lips now forming
Sealing her fate. Her eyes plead
A Tango tonight.?

Or would you rather
Teach me to Haiku perhaps?
In my pants or bed?

Is a risk I know
To give approval alone
Could not resist this!

raven · « **Reply #59 on:** October 19, 2008, 04:08:40 AM »

question is to sleep
or stay awake just to see
someone that may be

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